jueves, 28 de octubre de 2010

MY FAVOURITE DAY AT THE WEEKEND!(:

My favourite day in the weekend is saturday.I
usually get up at nine o´clock.Later I have 
breakfast , I have a milk and a toast. I talk with
my friends with the computer.Them always
cleaning my room.I meet my friends and we
have lunch.Later I do homework .Them I have
a shower and I go to the dinner and finally I go to the bed one o´clock or two o´clock



Friday 29th October 2010

1 comentario:

  1. ... day in (AT) the weekend is saturday (Saturday)... I have a (SOME) milk and a toast... Them (THEN I) always cleaning (CLEAN) .... Them (THEN) I... I go (OUT)to the (FOR DINNER) dinner and finally I go to the (NO ARTICLE, GO TO BED) bed (ATG) one o´clock or two o´clock

    Too many mistakes. Be careful next time! :(

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